Great stuff
For a final fantasy-esque story it's pretty interesting so far. The drawings can be alittle better, but that comes with practice, keep going with it and it'll shine through =)
The tweening is good for the most part, but could be more fluid, It just seems like in some scenes it's kinda choppy. Otherwise it's not a huge deal, just work on it and you'll get better at it.
I'll 5've you anyway. Just make the next ones alittle longer. NG has a 10MB limit so I'm sure you can squeeze in ALOT more.
Overall, I liked it!